Sandpaper, your love is as rough as sandpaper
Abrasive to carry out a frivolous caper
Like my heart is a wall you want to bring down
Be the chaos in this everyday ghost town
Sandpaper, your love is as square as sandpaper
You stand by your morals and whatever
The ruthlessness in your smile tells me I can’t
Resort to anything to make you ever recant
Sandpaper, your love is as aggressive as sandpaper
Removing layers like an in-the-heat raper
There’s a certain chill you give me with your glances
Belying the most innocuous of thine appearances
Sandpaper, your love is as smoothening as sandpaper
You only polish me to turn me to vapor…
10 comments:
'You only polish me to turn me to vapor' My mind is blown. Awesome
ok this is a very painful visualization..sandpaper on a heart
oh,, you still try to see brighter side!!
great writing :)
You find love in everything you see!!!. How about a poem on umm well...let me see.... a laptop charger?
@FoteSpeaks - Don't blow the mind yet. More is to follow! Thanks :)
@Madhur - Yaaar not rubbing it on the heart, that would be like the most horrible episode of Grey's Anatomy!
@Moonlite - The bright side is always there, only very few choose to see it :)
@Keats - Force of habit. Laptop charger is electrifying, no? Can be done ;)
aaaah painful where did you get the idea? :)
and why cant i subscribe to comments? what kind of template is this :(
you hung your boots? its been ages since sandpaper.
@Ani - I dunno man :|
@Lord Zulu - Sorta :(
@Tris: This piece of writing is beyond brilliant. And I don’t mind reading it everytime I come here looking for something new… But don’t say Sorta :( .. Get off your lazy ass and write something!
"Sandpaper, your love is as smoothening as sandpaper
You only polish me to turn me to vapor…" Sigh…..
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