Thursday, October 18, 2012

I'm just a lost bird
Wings are clipped partially

I'm a deer in headlights
Blinded by the fear

You do not make it easy
To voice a little pain

I'm just your woman
With few broken nails

3 comments:

Nikhil Ranjan said...

Oh, so Yeatsian!

But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly, because you tread on my dreams.

Anonymous said...

and you are back :). awesome lines specially:

"You do not make it easy
To voice a little pain

I'm just your woman
With few broken nails"

only you can leave things unsaid yet so apparently oozing out of every word. What a skill to go around the handicap inherent to any language! let them figure. [although i'm not sure if 'oozing out' is the right phrase. you'd know better :)]

Happy me :)!

Atrisa said...

Thank you, both! :) I have added some more to this in a notepad :P Tune has been created, need to figure some things out and I have a song!

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