Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Bedtime, linger around.
They want to dance little longer-
Vodka fueled burning toes.

4 comments:

Thousif Raza said...

lemme tell you archita, you have lot more potential than you think,

just concentrate and give it a lil more time and you will be suprised as to how much more beautful and nice you can write, just my opinion

take care and keep writing........

Meghana Naidu said...

i adore your 'little ones'!
i tend to be very 'wordy' myself and by that virtue brevity is something that intrigues me ;)

Atrisa said...

@ Thousif - Wow, you are so kind :) I think I know what the problem is; I don't read at all!

@ Meghana - Thanks a lot. I love some of your 'little ones' too!

ani_aset said...

Lovely haikus..the more i read more of your haikus..the more i'm happy that i understand what it is :)
I hope you write the right ones ;)

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