Monday, January 10, 2011

She hoped
they'd be closer than they were
but in that moment
with his face in her hands
and her elbows resting on his palm
it wasn't even physically possible!

Then
breaths turn into inches.

She asked him to not go
and he smiled, confused,
'cause she was coming along with him
but just for a day
just for that day.
He misunderstood her appeal.

Then
inches turn into miles.

You can go far without me
but she can't, he said.
Her strength becomes a curse, 
as he insults the one he claims to love.
She picks up the change
and empties it out in her torn pockets.

Then
miles turn into borders.

Her baggage was more now
than when she had left
Thought she could change his mind
if given another day
but he erased the times spent
like a duster on a chalkboard.

Then
borders turn into silences.

6 comments:

Azam said...

Brilliant.

Anonymous said...

That was really poignant. I need to let it soak in.

Varsha said...

Girl!! you are just AWESOME! excellently written :) keep posting many more of such wonders!

Atrisa said...

@Azam, Varsha - Thank you and hope you drop by often :)

@Jason - Take your time.

epaphroditus said...

Very enlighting...well done!

snigdha said...

: )
that made me go i love you in my head

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