Friday, July 9, 2010

I was cleaning out some folders on the laptop and found a folder full of old stuff. Here's another old poem!

Endless Rhapsody
No one remembers how it all began
How she stepped into forbidden no man's land
When twisted mind got the best of she
Lost souls entwined in endless rhapsody

Being hurt never stopped from playing the game
Bleeding from inside, it was the beguiling dame
Days-nights went on being sworn to secrecy
Lost souls survived the endless rhapsody

So consumed, it absolutely had to stop
Emptying the bowl of shame she had filled up
She bowed out with whatever modesty
Lost souls died in endless rhapsody

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Ah! Good ol' days :)

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

'So consumed, it absolutely had to stop
Emptying the bowl of shame she had filled up
She bowed out with whatever modesty
Lost souls died in endless rhapsody'


Awww Tris... This one is so true... And so poetic... Lovely...

S said...

I love the way you haven't exaggerated anything and every word speaks for itself.

Killer! :)

Atrisa said...

Thanks, you two :)

ani_aset said...

Wow you have kept it simple and straight here :D very dark . nice

Atrisa said...

@Ani - This is the only way I know of writing! Of course bettered being inspired by a few brilliant writers here and there.

Shreya said...

Was just going through your old stuff. If I could cry, this one would have caused a tear in my eye.

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