Mesmerizing me
is simple;
the only thing
you have to do
is talk
with that mouth
as it moves slowly,
in my head;
those eyes
that look into mine
and mine only;
those hands
that peck my arm
every few seconds
ever so naturally
I freeze
'cause I forget to breathe
every now and then
but I swear
I listen.
Sunday, January 31, 2010
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14 comments:
aah!
ever so simple and beautiful :)
:)
Oh! So nicely said! I agree. Simple. Just simple.
Thank you guys. Doesn't it put a smile on your face! :P
Oh it so does! :)
oooh, baby :)
That is a beautiful reaction. I hope he understands what a gift it is.
Romantic. Feminine.
Definitely not simple :)
@ Mentalie - I love your oohs!
@ Jason - Wow, thank you. Your comments are better than anyone's posts :)
@ BP - Thanks for acknowledging the complicated simplicity ;)
I'm new here, good structure and flow. Could have used better words at some places, but altogether a REALLY nice one.
Keep writing.
i read it again and i <3 it even more.
iEnchanted ...
@ Kertz - Thanks for dropping by :) Maybe next time I will let those dangerous pink fruity cocktails guide me ;)
@ Meg - Muah girly!
@ Anon - iAgree.
@risa LSD Blotters are divine ;)
superb atrisa..loved it :) something new to me from you :D
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