Sunday, January 10, 2010

Salt of my eye
becomes the proof of our love
on his mouth.

7 comments:

Meghana Naidu said...

ah
descriptive imagery, meet your nemesis.

PS: damn you
PPS: <3

Shamanth Huddar said...

Wow!

It's been long since your last beautiful and feathery thoughts in such simple words as a haiku.

I love it.

mentalie said...

ufff...

Atrisa said...

@ Meg - I miss you.

@ Shamanth - Yeah I had started to miss it too. It's not as easy as it looks, you should know :)

@ Mentalie - You no likey, too cheesy?

Anonymous said...

consciously subtle

--Sri

Anonymous said...

:'-(

ani_aset said...

though touching ..it aint a haiku i guess :(

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